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I’m so excited for this afternoon’s Community Critique!
What is it? I’m completing a Narratively Critique on a story draft submitted by Martha Bonnie—something I usually do one-on-one with writers—but this time we’re doing the critique publicly. All paid members can join us for the full process.
Earlier this week, I read the draft and shared my notes with Martha. Today at 3pm ET, we’re going to hop on a call to discuss my feedback and talk through a plan for a rewrite. And you’re all invited to join.
Keep reading the rest of this post to:
- Read the draft of Martha’s story, “Bananas, Fake Cows and Chlamydia” 
- Read my critique memo to Martha 
- Join us on the call this afternoon - UPDATE: Wow, this was such a great session. Recording coming soon! 


